Thursday, April 30, 2015

7th Period: The Week of 27 April - 1 May

7th Period: The Week of 27 April - 1 May 

Students had class on Monday and Wednesday and Friday of this week.

On Monday students turned in their essays on Henry V.

Students self-evaluated their essays by answering the following questions

How does this essay address the use of language? Does it show your ability to compare and contrast the use of language?

Which essential question from this unit is addressed in this essay? How well did you address this question in your essay?

What grade do you think you have earned on this assignment and why?

We were only able to enjoy a few Senior Presentations



Wednesday the class primarily enjoyed hearing Senior Thesis Presentations

Mr. Zartler introduced the "My Plan" essay.

On Friday students received a graphic organizer for the "My Plan" essay  and had the class period to write the essay, upload it to Naviance, and to turn in a hard copy with a grading rubric attached to Mr. Zartler.

4th Period: The Week of 27-20 April

4th Period: The Week of 27-30 April

Students had class on Monday and Thursday of this week.

On Monday students turned in their essays on Henry V.

Students self-evaluated their essays by answering the following questions

How does this essay address the use of language? Does it show your ability to compare and contrast the use of language?

Which essential question from this unit is addressed in this essay? How well did you address this question in your essay?

What grade do you think you have earned on this assignment and why?

After this the class discussed an article about the government of Afganistan's efforts to promote literacy and the work of Portland resident Zahar Wahab to help spread literacy there.

Then Mr. Zartler introduced the "My Plan" essay.

On Thursday students received a graphic organizer for the "My Plan" essay  and had the class period to write the essay, upload it to Naviance, and to turn in a hard copy with a grading rubric attached to Mr. Zartler.

Thursday, April 23, 2015

Thursday, April 23rd

4th Period continued with Thesis presentations.

Students were also reminded to read the article about Literacy in Afganistan for Monday.

The class reviewed for the Henry V paper due on Monday.

Mr. Zartler presented a lesson on Connotation and Denotation to prepare students for the Motif Tracking that students will pursue while reading Kite Runner. Students had time to begin reading Kite Runner.

Kite Runner Motif Tracking

Definition: A motif is a recurring object, concept, or structure in a work of literature.  A motif may also be two contrasting elements in a work such as good and evil.  The purpose of this journal is to track motifs that serve as ways to unify the work as a whole. 


Directions:  In a journal consisting of two columns, track three motifs found in the novel.  In the left hand column, write up to ten words of the quote where the motif appears, label the motif, and include the page number.  Include a minimum of five entries per motif (15 total).   In the right column, discuss the author’s purpose, tone, and your own insights about the function of the motif. 


Due Date:

Points Possible: 30

List the three motifs you will track here:

Motif                                                              Interpretation
Write the quote, page number and motif in this column
Write the author’s purpose, tone, your own insights in this column
Motif:

Page #:

Quote:





Motif:

Page #:

Quote:





                                   
                                   

Motifs:


Kites, games, friendship, regret, guilt, redemption, dreams, trees, clothing, deformity/scars (seen and unseen), music, weapons (slingshots, brass knuckles), food, colors, gifts, vehicles and books

Tuesday, April 21, 2015

Tuesday / Wednesday 21 / 22 April

Students were given a checklist to first self-check then peer-check their Henry V essays.

Then students read and analyzed a story about literacy in Afganistan.

Henry V Essay Checklist:
Henry V and modern war text analytical essay

Paper is about 3 typed pages, 2x spaced, 12 point font


Introduction includes
Thesis Statement (underline your thesis)
Both / All texts are introduced
Each body paragraph is alluded (use a different color for each body paragraph to circle the key word or words that are in both the introduction and the topic sentence.)

Each Paragraph has
Topic Sentences
Topic sentences share at least one key word with the thesis (use a different color for each body paragraph to circle the key word or words that are in both the introduction and the topic sentence.)
No initial pronouns or vague nouns: first mention of a noun is a proper noun



Quotations:
Quotations are introduced
Quotations are explained
Each explanation has at least one key word from the topic sentence of the paragraph
Quotations are in quotes or block indented
Quotes of three or more lines are block indented
Quotations are given a citation


Conclusion
Summarized (Good enough)
Expands and extends the paper (better)

Thesis statement(s) is (are) proved

Content: The paper addresses one of the essential questions of the unit.


Paper is well edited

Monday, April 20th

Both classes provided time for students to present their thesis research.

Both classes checked the novel Kite Runner out from the library.

Period 4 did a "Mystery Text" activity to begin the Kite Runner unit.

Tuesday, April 14, 2015

Tuesday and Wednesday April 14 and 15th

Class began with student presentations of thesis topics.

Students had time to work on their Henry V essays.

Rough drafts are due in one week April 21st and 22nd.

Essays are due Monday, April 27th.

Monday, April 13, 2015

Monday, 13 April

Students were reminded that thesis presentations are due next class.

The class discussed questions about presentations.


Students have been assigned on essay that addresses one of the essential questions for the unit:

How does language inspire meaning and expression of experience?

How does conflict serve as an instigator for change/growth?

Students are to analyze how one of the major speeches from Henry V (below) relates to a more modern text about war (further below). This essay will be two to three (2-3) pages long.


Next the class reviewed the speeches in Henry V that their essays could be about:

Henry V on Salic Law and the invasion of France Act I scene ii

King of France on war with England Act II scene iii in "No Fear Shakespeare" listed as II. iv. in other sources

Henry V St. Crispin's Day

The Duke of Burgundy on peace.

Texts that can be used for the paper include

The introduction to Jarhead.

Multi-media texts pertaining to the invasion of Iraq.

Winston Churchill's first speech as Prime Minister "Be Ye Men of Valour"

The introduction to All Quiet on the Western Front

The Ballad of the Green Berets (1966)

And "War" performed by Tom Jones





Thursday, April 9, 2015

Thursday, 9 April

Students worked independently and with Mr. Zartler on their thesis presentations.

Tuesday, April 7, 2015

Monday, 6 April, 2015

Class reviewed the thesis that is due NEXT class.


 Students were given the following information about presentations for their thesis. (info repeated at bottom of post)


The class reviewed three additional texts related to war.



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WOW Senior Thesis
Presentation Requirements
I want you to have the opportunity to present your research paper to the class in an entertaining and interesting way.  You’ll have 5 minutes to present, so be sure to keep your ideas moving so you can cover the scope of your findings.  Include a visual (slide, picture, survey, e.g.) which enhances your audiences understanding of your topic.  Be creative and entertaining.
I found several websites on the Internet that give helpful advice about presenting, and I’ve copied down below one in particular from A Research Guide for Students that I liked.
Presentations start on Tuesday or Wednesday April 14th and 15th .  I’ll have a sign-up sheet available next class period.

50 Summative Points

“Know the needs of your audience and match your contents to their needs. Know your material thoroughly. Put what you have to say in a logical sequence. Ensure your speech will be captivating to your audience as well as worth their time and attention. Practice and rehearse your speech at home or where you can be at ease and comfortable, in front of a mirror, your family, friends or colleagues. Use a tape-recorder and listen to yourself. Videotape your presentation and analyze it. Know what your strong and weak points are. Emphasize your strong points during your presentation.
When you are presenting in front of an audience, you are performing as an actor is on stage. How you are being perceived is very important. Dress appropriately for the occasion. Be solemn if your topic is serious. Present the desired image to your audience. Look pleasant, enthusiastic, confident, proud, but not arrogant. Remain calm. Appear relaxed, even if you feel nervous. Speak slowly, enunciate clearly, and show appropriate emotion and feeling relating to your topic. Establish rapport with your audience. Speak to the person farthest away from you to ensure your voice is loud enough to project to the back of the room. Vary the tone of your voice and dramatize if necessary. If a microphone is available, adjust and adapt your voice accordingly.
Body language is important. Standing, walking or moving about with appropriate hand gesture or facial expression is preferred to sitting down or standing still with head down and reading from a prepared speech. Use audio-visual aids or props for enhancement if appropriate and necessary. Master the use of presentation software such as PowerPoint well before your presentation. Do not over-dazzle your audience with excessive use of animation, sound clips, or gaudy colors which are inappropriate for your topic. Do not torture your audience by putting a lengthy document in tiny print on an overhead and reading it out to them.
Speak with conviction as if you really believe in what you are saying. Persuade your audience effectively. The material you present orally should have the same ingredients as that which are required for a written research paper, i.e. a logical progression from INTRODUCTION (Thesis statement) to BODY (strong supporting arguments, accurate and up-to-date information) to CONCLUSION (re-state thesis, summary, and logical conclusion).
Do not read from notes for any extended length of time although it is quite acceptable to glance at your notes infrequently. Speak loudly and clearly. Sound confident. Do not mumble. If you made an error, correct it, and continue. No need to make excuses or apologize profusely.
Maintain sincere eye contact with your audience. Use the 3-second method, e.g. look straight into the eyes of a person in the audience for 3 seconds at a time. Have direct eye contact with a number of people in the audience, and every now and then glance at the whole audience while speaking. Use your eye contact to make everyone in your audience feel involved.
Speak to your audience, listen to their questions, respond to their reactions, adjust and adapt. If what you have prepared is obviously not getting across to your audience, change your strategy mid-stream if you are well prepared to do so. Remember that communication is the key to a successful presentation. If you are short of time, know what can be safely left out. If you have extra time, know what could be effectively added. Always be prepared for the unexpected.
Pause. Allow yourself and your audience a little time to reflect and think. Don't race through your presentation and leave your audience, as well as yourself, feeling out of breath.
Add humor whenever appropriate and possible. Keep audience interested throughout your entire presentation. Remember that an interesting speech makes time fly, but a boring speech is always too long to endure even if the presentation time is the same.
When using audio-visual aids to enhance your presentation, be sure all necessary equipment is set up and in good working order prior to the presentation. If possible, have an emergency backup system readily available.  Check out the location ahead of time to ensure seating arrangements for audience, whiteboard, blackboard, lighting, location of projection screen, sound system, etc. are suitable for your presentation.
Have handouts ready and give them out at the appropriate time. Tell audience ahead of time that you will be giving out an outline of your presentation so that they will not waste time taking unnecessary notes during your presentation.
Know when to STOP talking. Use a timer or the microwave oven clock to time your presentation when preparing it at home. Just as you don't use unnecessary words in your written paper, you don't bore your audience with repetitious or unnecessary words in your oral presentation. To end your presentation, summarize your main points in the same way as you normally do in the CONCLUSION of a written paper. Remember, however, that there is a difference between spoken words appropriate for the ear and formally written words intended for reading. Terminate your presentation with an interesting remark or an appropriate punch line. Leave your listeners with a positive impression and a sense of completion. Do not belabor your closing remarks. Thank your audience and sit down.”




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Thesis Presentation                                                                               /50

Name: ___________________________     Date: _____________ original date scheduled?   Y/N